3/21/2007

Tom’s Diner

One morning, Suzanne sat in a coffee shop, Tom’s Diner. It was raining. So she asked the waiter to give her a cup of coffee. She looked around, watching people come and go in the diner, and someone waiting in the rain. She noticed some news and found something interesting on the paper, too. Suzanne’s thought came to her own from passers-by. She recalled someone’s familiar voice because of the rain. Finally, she finished her coffee and went to catch a train.

3 comments:

Ten said...

Maybe I should said:” Good job! “ or something like that. But I recommend you to write it in lively way! Come on! Don’t be so serious!

mio said...

The rearranged article is clean-cut and fleuently. By the way, do you have any ideas when you heard the song at the first time? @@

Anonymous said...

The song you posted here has a lighthearted melody, and involves the singer’s feeling and thoughts. Just like a customer who comes to a coffee shop and waiting for his train or friends, he sits down and order a cup of coffee, then he watch people and things around him. The image is simple, and it describes days in our life. The song coveys the singer’s joy, remembrance and observation, and every one who once came to a coffee shop.